Sunday, October 21, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday - The Beltane Witch - Live Steel


Happy Six Sentence Sunday! Thank you so much for visiting and taking the time to read this week's snippet. I really appreciate your time and the comments you leave for me.

Today I'm offering more from The Beltane Witch. In this snippet, Sabrina is trying to recover from her concussion and Darius promises to take her home to rest. That's when she noticed he's missing something.

Darius set Sabrina in the back seat and climbed in beside her while Moira stepped out to sweep the windshield. Sabrina wondered where he’d put his huge sword, grateful she didn’t have to hold it for him in the car.
Oh, man, that sounds bad. Can I hold your big sword, Darius? She stifled a giggle. Thank the Goddess he can’t hear my thoughts.
 
Gives a whole new meaning to "live steel". ;) There are several great authors on the Six Sentence Sunday list and a few of my favorites are Karla DoyleSarah BallanceSilver JamesZee Monodee, and Goran Zidar. Thank you for stopping by and happy reading! :)

26 comments:

  1. Oh go on, make him hear her thoughts! lol

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  2. Love the turn her thoughts take. Fun six. Great job!

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  3. LOL. That's hysterical. Great six!

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  4. Hmmm,so he has a big sword, huh? :D Fun six!

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  5. Great six!Love the thoughts in her head.

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  6. Hehe love her thoughts. Now you have me wondering if he *can* hear her thoughts. ;) Great six.

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  7. hmm yes, one has to choose ones words carefully when talking about weapons. :)

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  8. I probably wouldn't ask her to hold my sword. Never know what she'd do with it. Fun six!

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  9. Ha! Great pacing plus a great pun equals a great six! Math.

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  10. LOL. Fun! I'm also wondering if he can really hear her thoughts! :)

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  11. Wonder what he's done with his sword? Perhaps he realises he doesn't need it with Sabrina around!

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  12. I gigglesnorted coffee out my nose. Thanks. ;-P Fun six.

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  13. Now I want to know where his sword is...great excerpt. Your voice is very catching.

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  14. Is his sword tucked behind his tail? LOL!

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  15. You had me chuckling. Loved the six. :)

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  16. LMAO! That is a naughty though, indeed. Love it!

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