Sunday, February 17, 2013

Weekend Writing Warriors - Second Chance Succubus - Playtime

Welcome to the Weekend Writing Warriors, a list of authors showcasing their work for all and sundry, on Sundays. Thank you so much for visiting and if you choose to comment, I really appreciate it. Most of these snippets are unedited, works in progress, and while my snippets aren't consecutive, they are in order within the story. You can read last week's snippet HERE.

Today, I'm offering a snippet from my work in progress, a cross-over paranormal romantic suspense with BDSM elements, entitled Second Chance Succubus. CSI Chayse Wolffe and his twin Nik have followed Lady Aislynn down into her club. They've walked into a 'playroom' and are watching a scene.

The cowboy sauntered around the bound woman, cracking the whip, and watching her intently. Chayse wanted to pounce on him and hold him while his brother freed her, but Nik appeared to be as fascinated with the scene as the cowboy was.
Each clap of the leather against the air made the woman squirm against her restraints and moan loader. At first, she seemed to be in pain, fear twisting her features, but Chayse scented her arousal, and watched her nipples harden against her sheer t-shirt.
The cowboy snapped the whip once more, cocking his head as he studied his partner. He ran the hard handle of the whip down her arm and she jerked in surprise, squeaking a little as she opened her eyes.
“Did I give you permission to open your eyes, pet?”
She immediately snapped them shut and whispered, “No, Sir.”

Chayse has been pretty vanilla (for a werewolf). He just got a whole new education. ;) There are several great authors on the Weekend Writing Warrior list and a few of my favorites are Sarah Ballance, Charmaine Gordon, Goran Zidar, Karla Doyle, and Monica Enderle PierceThank you all for stopping by and happy reading! :)

34 comments:

  1. Terrific eight! The word sheer describes her shirt (misspelled, says the teach). I could hear the crack of the whip.

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  2. Very interesting. A lot of held back emotions. Great job!

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  3. Chayse needs to get out more apparently...but then, you're taking care of broadening his education LOL. Excellent excerpt!

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  4. Yipe,keep those eyes closed girlie!! Very visual snippet!!! :-)

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  5. Nice. Love the names of your heroes.

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  6. Very visual and I could feel the tension all around. Great job. :-)

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  7. Sounds like your very vanilla Chayse is gonna chocolate himself if he stays in that room much longer! ;P

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  8. Very good description. Totally had me envisioning the scene.

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  9. Oh, do tell! When is this tidbit coming out?

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  10. Oh, do tell! When is this tidbit coming out?

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  11. I think maybe Nik has led a less vanilla life than Chayse has. Either that or Nik's more open-minded.

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  12. Love it when characters have an opinion and we get to see it change over the course of a scene. Well played and intriguing.

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  13. Great job describing the whipping action against the wind. Somebody needs to pounce on this cowboy - and fast!

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  14. Yep, his life will never be the same again. Excellent choreography in this snippet.

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  15. Oh, my. An education, indeed!

    So, who's this cowboy?

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  16. Excellent descriptions in this scene, and it has a nice 'outside looking in' feel due to your choice of wording. Nice six!! Really sets the scene.

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  17. Now I'm dying to see his response to what he's just realized. Excellent description.

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  18. excellent characterization and imagery

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  19. Wow, great description in this snippet. Not what I would have expected from the captive. Now I'm intrigued.

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  20. Not sure I agree with your premise, but good writing.

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  21. Great description, especially the whip effect.

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  22. Wow! What a vivid scene. I'm already LOVING this story. :)

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  23. Wow, totally hooked, can't wait for more next week!

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  24. Fantastic description, Siobhan! It seems Chayse's twin is a step ahead ;-)

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  25. Super description. Very vivid scene.

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  26. Super description. Very vivid scene.

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  27. Great description. I could hear the whip cracking. Nicely done, Siobhan! :-)

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  28. Smoking hot snippet!

    ~Joyce Scarbrough

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  29. That was very nicely done. I think I'm going to need a lie down before reading anything else. Wow...

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  30. I just love how you put me in the scene. Great descriptions and the details are fabulous!

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