Today, I'm offering a snippet from my work in progress, a cross-over paranormal romantic suspense with BDSM elements, entitled Second Chance Succubus. CSI Chayse Wolffe and his twin Nik have followed Lady Aislynn down into her club. They've walked into a 'playroom' and are watching a scene.
The cowboy
sauntered around the bound woman, cracking the whip, and watching her intently.
Chayse wanted to pounce on him and hold him while his brother freed her, but
Nik appeared to be as fascinated with the scene as the cowboy was.
Each clap of the
leather against the air made the woman squirm against her restraints and moan
loader. At first, she seemed to be in pain, fear twisting her features, but Chayse
scented her arousal, and watched her nipples harden against her sheer t-shirt.
The cowboy
snapped the whip once more, cocking his head as he studied his partner. He ran
the hard handle of the whip down her arm and she jerked in surprise, squeaking
a little as she opened her eyes.
“Did I give you
permission to open your eyes, pet?”
She immediately
snapped them shut and whispered, “No, Sir.”
Chayse has been pretty vanilla (for a werewolf). He just got a whole new education. ;) There are several great authors on the Weekend Writing Warrior list and a few of my favorites are Sarah Ballance, Charmaine Gordon, Goran Zidar, Karla Doyle, and Monica Enderle Pierce. Thank you all for stopping by and happy reading! :)
Terrific eight! The word sheer describes her shirt (misspelled, says the teach). I could hear the crack of the whip.
ReplyDeleteVery visual scene, hot too!
ReplyDeleteVery interesting. A lot of held back emotions. Great job!
ReplyDeleteChayse needs to get out more apparently...but then, you're taking care of broadening his education LOL. Excellent excerpt!
ReplyDeleteYipe,keep those eyes closed girlie!! Very visual snippet!!! :-)
ReplyDeleteNice. Love the names of your heroes.
ReplyDeleteVery visual and I could feel the tension all around. Great job. :-)
ReplyDeleteSounds like your very vanilla Chayse is gonna chocolate himself if he stays in that room much longer! ;P
ReplyDeleteVery good description. Totally had me envisioning the scene.
ReplyDeleteOh, do tell! When is this tidbit coming out?
ReplyDeleteOh, do tell! When is this tidbit coming out?
ReplyDeleteI think maybe Nik has led a less vanilla life than Chayse has. Either that or Nik's more open-minded.
ReplyDeleteLove it when characters have an opinion and we get to see it change over the course of a scene. Well played and intriguing.
ReplyDeleteGreat job describing the whipping action against the wind. Somebody needs to pounce on this cowboy - and fast!
ReplyDeleteYep, his life will never be the same again. Excellent choreography in this snippet.
ReplyDeleteOh, my. An education, indeed!
ReplyDeleteSo, who's this cowboy?
Excellent descriptions in this scene, and it has a nice 'outside looking in' feel due to your choice of wording. Nice six!! Really sets the scene.
ReplyDeleteNicely done :-)
ReplyDeleteNow I'm dying to see his response to what he's just realized. Excellent description.
ReplyDeleteexcellent characterization and imagery
ReplyDeleteWow, great description in this snippet. Not what I would have expected from the captive. Now I'm intrigued.
ReplyDeleteNot sure I agree with your premise, but good writing.
ReplyDeleteGreat description, especially the whip effect.
ReplyDeleteWow! What a vivid scene. I'm already LOVING this story. :)
ReplyDeleteWow, totally hooked, can't wait for more next week!
ReplyDeleteFantastic description, Siobhan! It seems Chayse's twin is a step ahead ;-)
ReplyDeleteSuper description. Very vivid scene.
ReplyDeleteSuper description. Very vivid scene.
ReplyDeleteGreat description. I could hear the whip cracking. Nicely done, Siobhan! :-)
ReplyDeleteSmoking hot snippet!
ReplyDelete~Joyce Scarbrough
That was very nicely done. I think I'm going to need a lie down before reading anything else. Wow...
ReplyDeleteA very vivd scene.
ReplyDeleteVery hot snippet!
ReplyDeleteI just love how you put me in the scene. Great descriptions and the details are fabulous!
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