Today I'm offering another snippet from The Bone Flute, a paranormal romantic suspense. Rain's sexy intruder has some strange claims and even stranger explanations of his origin.
He raised his
ringless hands up in a placating gesture and said, “Becalm yourself, my lady.
I’m not here to hurt you; you brought me here, I didn’t follow you.”
“What the hell
are you talking about?”
Keeping his
hands where she could see them, he moved to the side and pointed at the long
box on the table. She followed his motions, glancing quickly at the box, then
back to him.
“I’m bound to the Bone Flute, my lady, and where it goes, I must also go."That gives a whole new meaning to man in a box. ;) There are several great authors on the Six Sentence Sunday list and a few of my favorites are Karla Doyle, Sarah Ballance, Silver James, Laura Kaye, Cara Michaels, and Goran Zidar. Thank you for stopping by and happy reading! :)
Mmmm, wonder what she will do with him, this man in a box. Makes the imagination go wild :)
ReplyDeleteWell, that's an interesting situation. Though I don't think his explanation would calm me. LOL
ReplyDeleteOoh, l wonder what she's going to do with him now?
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure that would make me feel any calmer:)
ReplyDeleteIntriguing twist! Thanks for sharing.
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Interesting. Gotta wonder what the bone flute is. :)
ReplyDeleteWow, very interesting. I could feel the tension. Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThat would really put me on edge. I'd be counting his legs for a start. :) nice build of tension.
ReplyDeleteIntriguing premise!
ReplyDeleteI like the sense I get of his character in this moment. Like he's had some practice with these 'please don't freak out' moments. ;)
ReplyDeleteOh, interesting twist! Ca't wait to see where this goes!
ReplyDeleteOh! I can't wait to find out her reaction to that news!
ReplyDeleteHow interesting she noticed his "ringless hands". Great six, Siobhan!
ReplyDeleteWell he does know why he's there. I get the feeling she won't buy that, though. Intriguing six!
ReplyDeleteI like this premise.
ReplyDeleteI like this, there's something primal and sensual about music and him being tied to the flute evokes those sensations.
ReplyDeleteHow interesting! I want to know his history and how he became tied to the flute. Intriguing six!
ReplyDeleteNicely done, intriguing!
ReplyDeleteLove his dialogue. I can't wait to find out where he came from. Awesome six!
ReplyDeleteI think she's really gonna be nervous now! Great six!
ReplyDeleteI started smiling early on in this snippet and it just wouldn't go away. A pure joy to read. The dialogue between the two is great.
ReplyDeleteThis sounds intriguing. Quite creative.
ReplyDeleteOmg, great six! I would totally be freaking out on so many levels. Can't wait to read the next part!
ReplyDeleteWell, now, there's an intriguing twist!
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