Sunday, January 13, 2013

Six Sentance Sunday - Second Chance Succubus - A Nose for Crime

Happy Six Sentence Sunday again. Thank you so much for visiting and taking the time to read this week's snippet as Six Sentence Sunday winds down. I really appreciate your time and the comments you leave for me. While my sixes aren't always right after each other, they are in chronological order. You can find last week's six here.

Today, I'm offering a snippet from a new work in progress, a cross-over paranormal romantic suspense with BDSM elements, entitled Second Chance Succubus. Here we meet one of the two heroes, Chayse Wolffe, and his first sight of the body from last week's snippet. Chayse doesn't have much tolerance for inanity.

Las Vegas had the nickname of the Capitol of Second Chances, but this guy wouldn’t get one tonight.
“No doubt it’s a murder.”
CSI Chayse Wolffe looked up from his notes at the owner of the voice and tried to dampen down his disgust. What was your first clue, genius? The uniform grimaced at the dead body and crossed himself.
“We’ll know after we study the forensic evidence.”

Everybody's an expert or a critic. ;) There are several great authors on the Six Sentence Sunday list and a few of my favorites are Karla DoyleSarah BallanceSilver JamesLaura Kaye, and Goran Zidar. Thank you for stopping by and happy reading! :)

19 comments:

  1. I like the attitude in your characters! I also thought it was a nice touch to have him cross himself.

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  2. Oh, I like this concept and his internal sarcasm. Great snippet.

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  3. Eek! I don't think they get along. LOL So much tension in this six.

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  4. Neat premise and a great introduction to Chayse, Siobhan. :)

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  5. I definitely see Chayse's intolerance for inanity. I like how you refer to Vegas as the Capitol of Second Chances...I was there over the holidays and didn't have much luck at the casinos. Nice six overall!

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  6. Bwahahaha! Loved the internal comment.

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  7. I take it the murder method was pretty obvious?

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  8. Great internalization! I like Chayse!

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  9. Oh, yeah. Chayse is going to be a character to keep my eye on. And as a former CSI, street cops are the masters of the "d'uh" factor. LOL

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  10. Oh, goody goody. I LOVE suspense! Can't wait to find out what made the murder obvious!

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  11. Wonderful six! So much information delivered here.

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  12. Intriguing six! So many questions arise from this!

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  13. Chayse doesn't seem to suffer fools gladly. Very interesting title and story line! Can't wait to see how it plays out. :)

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  14. I love the third paragraph. Chayse and I share the sarcastic nature. Excellent 6!

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  15. LOL loved the sarcasm in this bit. Great Six, Siobhan! :)

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  16. Love the name Chayse Wolffe... it's got an imagery about it that paints a clear picture of the character. Plus it's like something out of Bold and the Beautiful :-)

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