Today, I'm offering a snippet from my work in progress, a cross-over paranormal romantic suspense with BDSM elements, entitled Second Chance Succubus. Here we meet the heroine, Lady Aislynn, the succubus and owner of Eve's Paradise from last week's snippet. While many of you have said you wanted to see the first interaction between Nik and Chayse, I felt it wise to show you Aislynn as SSS closes it's doors. Aislynn is a Fem Domme and a succubus determined not to kill anyone again mostly by cutting men out of her life. Aislynn is the first to speak.
“Beautifully
done, Felicia, I’m pleased.”
“Thank you,
Mistress.”
Though the club
didn’t open for another hour, the sleek oak doors swung wide and two men
sauntered in. Aislynn absorbed their energies, inhaling the delicious curls of
male, Elder Races, and…twins?
“Oh, that’s not
good,” Felicia muttered, her expression hardening. “One of them is a cop.”
Interesting.
Aislynn has no idea what she's in for. ;) There are several great authors on the Six Sentence Sunday list and a few of my favorites are Karla Doyle, Sarah Ballance, Silver James, J. M. Blackman, Gem Sivad, and Goran Zidar.
Thank you all for stopping by and accompanying me on this journey. I wish you all the very best and hope to see you on the new list starting at Skye Warren's place. Happy reading! :)
Hey, thanks for the link to Skye's place. I hate seeing SSS end and it seems it might live on. Fantastic. Your six today has me wondering if Felicia can handle these two. ;)
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~gem
You're welcome, Gem. I'm hoping it will be a good draw of folks, and I'm glad it continues somewhere. Thanks for stopping by and I'll definitely catch you on FB and Twitter. :)
DeleteSiobhan
What a way to end! I hope we can pick this up next week with the new SSS. Love the line about delicious curls of male.
ReplyDeleteI'm looking forward to it, Cerian. Thanks so much for stopping by today. :)
DeleteI've really enjoyed the snippets you've posted and am thrilled you've decided to continue posting. I love the third paragraph in this week's snippet.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jess. It has been so good to be part of this writing community. :)
DeleteCops and succubi - fascinating combination.
ReplyDeleteI've enjoyed your sixes. See you unofficially next Sunday. :)
Definitely, on both counts, Elin, :)
DeleteOh goody! A succubus story! My favorite. Damn cops ruin all the fun.
ReplyDeleteOh, this cop is going to be a handful, definitely, but it might be a good thing. :D Thanks for hanging with me, Claire. :)
DeleteLove the imagery of the doors and her taking in their masculinity. It's been a pleasure reading your snippets and hope we can stay in touch. Good luck with everything, Siobhan!
ReplyDeleteYou're part of the unofficial Six Sentence Sunday, aren't you, Frank? I'll definitely be there. Thanks and good luck to you, too. :)
DeleteInteresting indeed! What a shame l can't read the next six next week!
ReplyDeleteI think you will. I'll be on the unofficial list next week if you want to know more. Thanks for visiting my sixes all the way through, Gemma. :)
DeleteFascinating! Will be interesting to see where the story goes!
ReplyDeleteOoh, very interesting, indeed! I would love to see what happens with this. Cops can be fun, right?
ReplyDeleteYes, they can indeed, Melissa. Although, this one has a hangup about Succubae. :) Thanks for stopping by today. :)
DeleteSexy description of the men!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Laura. They get sexier as the story goes on. :)
DeleteSounds like Felicia might have something she doesn't want discovered. Good six.
ReplyDeleteWow, Casey, you're good! She does indeed, but it's not what you might think. :)
DeleteTemptation and conflict, they come together beautifully in your six. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteThank you, SJ. :)
DeleteOh Man, I've got to get my hands on this!
ReplyDeleteI signed up for the Unofficial Six Sentence Sunday and offered to help moderate, but I hadn't heard anything back. So, I wasn't sure if it was happening. BUT, I've signed up so I'll see you next Sunday!
I haven't heard anything more, either, but I hope it does, Karysa. Glad to hear you're moderating if so. If not, there's another list Weekend Writing Warriors that Paula Martin has invited me to and there you get to post 8 sentences. I'll definitely check it out next week.
DeleteVERY interesting :-)
ReplyDeleteHope to see you at Weekend Writing Warriors (starting next week, same as SSS but with 8 sentences) http://www.wewriwa.com/
Thanks so much, Paula. I'll definitely take a look next week. Which day do we sign up to be on the list?
DeleteThat is interesting! Enjoyed this snippet a lot.
ReplyDeleteI emailed Skye Warren yesterday about her snippet plans and she said she wasn't sure if she was going to do it. She wondered if people were still interested. But it looks like she has quite a list going.
Yes she does. However, if not, there's also the Weekend Writing Warriors that Paula mentioned. I'll definitely look there. Thanks for letting me know, Cara. :)
DeleteInteresting indeed! I need more of this story! :)
ReplyDeleteYay! I'm glad you're enjoying it, Jessica. More to come. :)
DeleteSound like Felicia has secrets. Great six and fabulous cliff hanger. Will check out the WWW. Wishing you all the best Siobhan.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, S.E. :)
DeleteThe elder races caught my attention. Are these two more than human?
ReplyDeleteI'm on both lists right now and hope the weekend warriors can take 6 sentences first round, anyway.
Yes, those boys are werewolves, Sue Ann. Thanks for stopping by. :)
DeleteCuriouser and curiouser... I like the way you described the smell as simply being male... very primal
ReplyDeleteThanks, Goran. That's exactly the image and impression I was going for. Glad it hooked you. :)
DeleteHmmm. Very curious six! This story just keeps getting more and more intriguing! I'm glad you are going to continue to post - I'm looking forward to reading more snippets!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you're enjoying it, Lorraine. Thanks for visiting. :)
DeleteI'll say, it's interesting. Wonderful six. Thanks for all the wonderful SSS over the years. Best of luck!
ReplyDeleteThanks, A.S. So glad we connected at SSS. :)
DeleteTwins, and one is a cop, oh I'm definitely intrigued!
ReplyDeleteOh, when you meet their whole family, all in law enforcement in one way or another, I think you'll enjoy all of them, L. Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteYou've hit every happy-reading-nerve I have: bdsm elements, check; succubus, check; fantastic details (oak door), check; male twins, check, check, check, check. :)
ReplyDeleteAnd don't forget, the twins are werewolves, Jalisa. ;) Thanks for reading. :)
DeleteOh, boy. I bet when they start getting together it's going to be amazing! Great set up!
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