Today, I'm offering a snippet from a new work in progress, a cross-over paranormal romantic suspense with BDSM elements, entitled Second Chance Succubus. Here we meet one of the two heroes, Chayse Wolffe, and his first sight of the body from last week's snippet. Chayse doesn't have much tolerance for inanity.
Las Vegas had
the nickname of the Capitol of Second Chances, but this guy wouldn’t get one
tonight.
“No doubt it’s a
murder.”
CSI Chayse
Wolffe looked up from his notes at the owner of the voice and tried to dampen
down his disgust. What was your first
clue, genius? The uniform grimaced at the dead body and crossed himself.
“We’ll know after we
study the forensic evidence.”
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I like the attitude in your characters! I also thought it was a nice touch to have him cross himself.
ReplyDeleteOh, I like this concept and his internal sarcasm. Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteI like the sarcasm, too.
ReplyDeleteEek! I don't think they get along. LOL So much tension in this six.
ReplyDeleteNeat premise and a great introduction to Chayse, Siobhan. :)
ReplyDeleteI definitely see Chayse's intolerance for inanity. I like how you refer to Vegas as the Capitol of Second Chances...I was there over the holidays and didn't have much luck at the casinos. Nice six overall!
ReplyDeleteBwahahaha! Loved the internal comment.
ReplyDeleteI take it the murder method was pretty obvious?
ReplyDeleteGreat internalization! I like Chayse!
ReplyDeleteOh, yeah. Chayse is going to be a character to keep my eye on. And as a former CSI, street cops are the masters of the "d'uh" factor. LOL
ReplyDeleteOh, goody goody. I LOVE suspense! Can't wait to find out what made the murder obvious!
ReplyDeleteWonderful six! So much information delivered here.
ReplyDeleteIntriguing six! So many questions arise from this!
ReplyDeleteChayse doesn't seem to suffer fools gladly. Very interesting title and story line! Can't wait to see how it plays out. :)
ReplyDeleteLove his snide inner thought!
ReplyDeleteI love the third paragraph. Chayse and I share the sarcastic nature. Excellent 6!
ReplyDeleteLOL loved the sarcasm in this bit. Great Six, Siobhan! :)
ReplyDeleteLove the name Chayse Wolffe... it's got an imagery about it that paints a clear picture of the character. Plus it's like something out of Bold and the Beautiful :-)
ReplyDeleteGreat sarcasm in this six :)
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