Sunday, January 29, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday - The Order of the Dragon - Drake Makes His Move

Welcome back, Sixers! My week has been filled with editing punctuated with moments of furious writing. Got the edits back from Evernight and should have them done this coming week. So excited to get Her Devoted Vampire out in March! Thank you to all of you for coming to read my WIP snippets and for your comments. I really appreciate them. Several other authors participate in Six Sentence Sunday and I always check out Ruthie Knox, Lynne Murray, Zee Monodee, and Karysa Faire.

In this snippet of The Order of the Dragon, Dr. Aliandra Cantora knows Drake MacGregor needs blood, but when he learns she's a dragon, he refuses to feed from her. She taunts him until she gets what she wants.

Drake snarled as he launched himself at Aliandra, slamming into her and pressing her against the medical table. Her inner dragon howled with triumph as he pressed his growing erection between her legs and stapled her hands to the bench behind her.
“If my control wasn’t excellent, Dr. Cantora, I would have sunk my cock into your sweet-scented pussy and my teeth into your neck,” he hissed, his eyes blazing crimson.
“Then do it, Mr. MacGregor.”
He groaned and closed his eyes, but he dropped his lips to her throat once more and licked her, making her shiver. Then his teeth broke her skin and momentary pain exploded into erotic pleasure.

See? Now everyone's much happier...or they will be. ;) Thank you for stopping by and happy reading! :)

27 comments:

  1. Love how they're so formal while taunting each other. Yep, bet they're much happier now, lol

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  2. Hehe... Like Cate said. I love the Dr. and Mr. formality while they're both dying to get a piece of each other. Great 6, Siobhan! :)

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  3. Very nice. Such smooth writing. I really like this piece.

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  4. The erotic pleasure, wonderfully painted with the idea of momentary pain.

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  5. Oh yes, I bet everyone's happier *wink* Nothing like a driven, determined woman, innit? :)

    Thanks for the mention, girl! xoxo

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  6. "Score" one for the dragon, LOL! Great (and h-h-hhhot) six!

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  7. Love the image of him "stapling" her wrists to the table. Very interesting, effective verb choice.

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  8. "Stapled her hands" -- love that. The cock line is nice, too, of course. ;)

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  9. Well, I'm certainly happier. :) This snippet was very...bold. He was blatant about what he wanted and it looks like he'll get it!

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  10. So he wants to and he doesn't want to. I love that inner conflict. You've described it perfectly in just a few words. Good writing!

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  11. "Then his teeth broke her skin and momentary pain exploded into erotic pleasure." I think I just died a little reading that. Yum! Great six. :)

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  12. oooh hot 6! and I loved the imagery and action, especially how you described him pinning her to the table...

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  13. That didn't happen to me at my last doctor's visit...

    Really enjoyed the snippet, Siobhan!

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  14. Wow... what a hot six! I love how you've so easily shown us the conflict and tension with such few words. Now I want to read it! :D

    I'm new to Six Sentence and don't have my name up on the list, so if you wouldn't mind stopping by to check out mine if you have time, I'd appreciate it!

    http://jasmine-walt.blogspot.com/2012/01/six-sentence-sunday-first-post.html

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  15. I take it dragons are shapechangers? Just what does dragon blood do to a vampire?

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  16. Like the interplay between dragon and vampire. I get the feeling that she allowed him to strong arm her to the wall.

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  17. Incredible six! I have such a soft spot for dragons :) I look forward to reading more.

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  18. wow, dragons and vampires? How awesome is that? A great six this week!

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  19. Yippee! These two have fabulous interplay. And I love how Aliandra is in control, even if she's currently pinned down. ;-)

    And thank you so much for your encouragement and support!!!

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  20. Wow, that's HOT! I love all that tension. And her dare ... oh, yum.

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  21. Great chemistry and literally tasty interplay vetween these two! There must be more to come!

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  22. 'Then do it, Mr. MacGregor.' Love that! Got her what she wanted. Delicious six!

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  23. Hot. I love how their personalities play against each other here.

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