Sunday, October 2, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - The Goblin King - Tricia's Night in the Casino


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Today, I'm introducing Tricia MacGowan, waitress at the Hell's Palace Hotel and Casino in Las Vegas, from WIP The Goblin King. She's had a rough day and some hick accused her of being a prostitute. She thumped him in the shoulder with her flat tray and stomped on his foot with her MaryJane shoe.

            Tricia felt her lips pull back from her teeth in an aggressive grimace and she snarled at him wordlessly, but whirled and stomped off before delivering more physical damage. Her breath sawed in and out of her chest like a bellows and she wanted to break something in her fury. The anger felt like a physical thing, as if she could reach out and mold it into something to change the world around her.
            “Did you see that?!” Billy Ray’s voice shrieked behind her as he struggled in William’s and Tyler’s grips. “She had fucking long fangs and her eyes turned red!"

Oh-ho! Perhaps our sweet waitress has more going on in her life than we thought. I hope you enjoyed and I'll see you next week, when you'll meet the Goblin King himself. Happy reading!

26 comments:

  1. Whoa! She seems ready to throw down. Or maybe chow down, lol. Great six :D

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  2. Excellent six and I wanted to know more.

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  3. Oh, I think Mr Billy Ray was a lucky man. Gotta love a feisty heroine!

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  4. Siobhan, great six! I didn't see that coming. Exciting!!!

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  5. I believe she has their attention. Won't be any more inappropriate remarks,I bet. Great action in these six!

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  6. Oh my! What is she??? Love it, great six! :)

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  7. Interesting! Makes you want to know more.

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  8. Maybe there's a good reason she works in Hell's Palace! That guy seems to have gotten off easy if she can sprout fangs! Awesome six!

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  9. Oh, I love this! Go her for self-control, especially if she has the fangs to back up her anger!I can't wait to hear more about her. Hope to see more next Sunday!

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  10. Yikes. "You wouldn't like me when I get angry" comes to mind. Nice six!

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  11. Wonderful description of her fury. As far as the fangs, yeah I'd say she had something else going on. Terrific six!

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  12. He's lucky she didn't do more, lol. Thanks for sharing!

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  13. Absolutely love it! What a fun premise. Can't wait for more. :)

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  14. Bum bum bum! LOVED IT! Excellent detail! And I loved that last line ;)

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  15. Great description. Love the breath sawing in and out line!

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  16. And I bet someone has a brown streak in their undies. ;)

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  17. Ha!!! Billy Ray should be scared! Great Six!!

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  18. Intriguing premise and a fun six! The Goblin King sounds like even more fun to come!

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  19. Well indeed! I'm more than a little scared for him right now. Great six!

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