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Friday, December 30, 2011

#ThursThreads - Week Three - Winners

 
Week Three of #ThursThreads brought some awesome stories! Huge thank you to all who entered in the last week of the year. It was great to see all of you and read your tales. And another huge thank you to judge Rafe B. for reading through all the stories.

Entries:
  • Nicole Wolverton | @nicolewolverton
  • Gordon Bonnet | @TalesofWhoa
  • Rafe B | @etcet
  • Charles W Jones | @ChuckWesJ
  • Ryan Strohman | @rastrohman
  • Robert Mahone | @Computilizer
  • Cara Michaels | @caramichaels
  • Wendy Russo | @wendysrusso
  • Wakefield Mahon | @WakefieldMahon
  • AJ Aalto | @AJAalto
  • Robby Hilliard | @redshirt6
  • David A Ludwig | @DavidALudwig
  • Nellie Batz | @solimond
  • Michael Kozlowski | @MAKozlowski
  • Clare Stubbs | @ClareStubbs2
  • Jeffrey Hollar | @Klingorengi
  • Tom Keller | @dryadsgarden
  • @LupusAnthropos
 
Winners Announcement:

Honorable Mentions
Michael Kozlowski | @MAKozlowski
Rafe says: I am a sucker for a good Devil's Contract riff, and the fact that Satan's profanity-spewing in his irritation charmed me. It's how I'd play the role, after all...

Nellie Batz | @solimond
Rafe says: With so many stories about ritual sacrifice, this was my favorite twist on the theme.

AJ Aalto | @AJAalto
Rafe says: I'd simply link Prodigy's "Firestarter" as a soundtrack, but this scene felt like it carried more substance and heft than its length would suggest.

Week Three Winner
 

Rafe says: I can't offer any praise higher than, "I want to see what else Gramps would mash up into what he's going to tell those kids."
 
 “It had been so for centuries, but it had not always been so,” he said, as the four children sat listening. “Long ago, in galaxy far, far away, there was a—“

“Hey,” the oldest boy said, “that’s ‘Star Wars’, Grandpa.”

The two girls, one the same age as the older boy and the other a few years younger, remained silent. The youngest boy sat absently tugging on the footies of his pajamas.

“What? No,” the old man said. “It may sounds like it, but it isn’t.”

The oldest boy looked doubtful, his mouth twisting to one side as he shrugged his shoulders in reply.

“Okay then,” the old man continued. “Long ago in a galaxy far, far, far away,” he emphasized the final ‘far’, “there was a quaint little place filled with peaceful, rolling farm lands and little people and one of the little people was having a birthday party! His name was Milo Scaggins.”

“Grandpa,” said the oldest girl.

“Huh? What?”

“That’s ‘The Hobbit’, Grandpa.”

“Can we go watch T.V., Grandpa?” the oldest boy asked.

“Fine,” the old man said. “Go watch T.V.” The two oldest children were gone in a flash.

The old man looked, crestfallen, at the two remaining.

“Stowy, Gwampa. Stowy,” the little boy said. The little girl smiled and nodded her head.

The old man smiled. “Alright then. Well, it just so happens that Milo Scaggins was turning, oh I don’t know, eleventy-three, when suddenly a house fell on the wicked witch of the…”
 
Congratulations Robby, Michael, Nellie, and AJ! Claim your badges and display them with pride. You certainly earned it! :) 

Pass on the great news on Twitter, Facebook, Google Plus, shiny mirrors, Morse Code, and signal flags. Check out all the stories here and I hope to see you all back next week for #ThursThreads in the New Year 2012! Happy Holidays. :)
 

Thursday, December 29, 2011

#ThursThreads - The Challenge that Ties Tales Together - Week Three

 
Welcome to Week Three of #ThursThreads!

It's Thursday, so what should you be doing? Writing #FlashFiction, that's what! And I've got the challenge for you. This is the last Thursday of 2011 and the new year looms brightly on the horizon. Take the challenge and run with it!

Here's how it works:
  • The prompt is a line from the previous week's winning tale.
  • The prompt can appear ANYWHERE in your story and is included in your word count.
Rules to the Game:
  • This is a Flash Fiction challenge, which means your story must be a minimum of 100 words, maximum of 250.
  • Incorporate the prompt anywhere into your story (included in your word count).
  • Post your story in the comments section of this post
  • Include your word count (or be excluded from judging)
  • Include your Twitter handle or email (so we know how to find you)
  • The challenge is open 7 AM to 7 PM Pacific Time
  • The winner will be announced on Friday, depending on how early the judge gets up. ;)
How it benefits you:
  • You get a nifty cool badge to display on your blog or site (because we're all about promotion - you know you are!)
  • You get instant recognition of your writing prowess on this blog!
  • Your writing colleagues shall announce and proclaim your greatness on Facebook, Twitter, and Google + 

Our Judge for Week Three:

The thing that goes clank in the night, and cheesey, possibly sexy, word and weight wrangler, Rafe B.



And now your #ThursThreads Challenge, tying tales together.

The Prompt:

"It had been so for centuries, but it had not always been so."

Away with you, Flash Fiction Fanatics, and show us your #ThursThread. Good luck! :)