Welcome to the Snippet Sunday on the Weird, the Wild, and the Wicked. Sorry I haven't been around much, I've moved locations, found the internet, and now can do more. Thank you so much for visiting. If you choose to comment today, I really appreciate it. The snippets are from my upcoming release, Bronco's Rough Ride, a military romantic suspense set in Las Vegas. It's a prequel to The Navy's Ghost, set 10 years earlier. No paranormal critters in this one, though there's plenty of kick-ass adventure and hot sex. You can read last week's snippet HERE.
Lindsey is trying to make an awkward situation better by talking to John as she attempts to get him dressed. Not quite like dressing a baby doll. For example, he's bigger, heavier, and far more aware of what she's doing.
She reached for his
arm and gathered the heavy limb, enjoying the scent of his skin and the rough
texture of his palm. She rubbed the calluses with her thumbs, noting the
locations of them. The calluses spoke of experience and understanding of
weapons. Something about them sent excitement shooting to her groin. Damn, military men are sexy.
“You have beautiful
hands, John.” She turned his arm over to look at the veins and muscles beneath
the dark hair of his forearm. “I love the strength in them. They show your
experience without being ostentatious. You don’t have to scream about your
knowledge. Your body shows your capabilities.” She raised her gaze to his.
“It’s beautiful.”
I couldn't agree more with Lindsey. ;) There are several great authors on the Weekend Writing Warrior list and in the Snippet Sunday Facebook group. A few of my favorites are Charley Descoteaux, SJ Maylee, Gem Sivad, Goran Zidar, Veronica Scott, and Karla Doyle.
If you're interested in more from Bronco's Rough Ride, here's the blurb:
Chief
Petty Officer John "Bronco" Andrews only meant to stay one
night in Vegas for a little R&R before resuming his duties as a
US Navy SEAL in Coronado. But someone slips him a mickey in the bar
and he finds himself in Madame LeBeau's sex trade. As the product.
Doped up on ketamine to keep him docile, Bronco has no choice but to
let it ride.
Detective
Lindsey Jarvis has been undercover in LeBeau's sex
slave racket for two years and she almost has enough evidence to take
it down. Between abduction,
prostitution, and murder,
she has LeBeau by the short hairs. All she needs is a "product".
John is the perfect witness if she can get him out before the drugs
shut down his heart. Then she'll be free to start a normal life.
Lindsey
doesn't count on her overwhelming attraction for Bronco or her need
to see him through detox. But she's a cop in Vegas and he's a Navy
SEAL, two lifestyles with too much unpredictability to maintain a
relationship. Neither have time for more than one wild rough ride,
and what happens in Vegas, stays. Forever.
It's now available at Smashwords, Amazon, B&N, and All Romance eBooks. Thanks so much for stopping by and happy reading. :)
Sometimes, we overlook the importance and beauty of hands. In the dark, we see with them.
ReplyDeleteNice 8!
I love how you used the texture of the hands here, great job!
ReplyDeleteLove her descriptions of his body... very very sensual. And love that she sees the meaning and stories behind his physique! Well done!
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I love her inner thoughts and the way she knew every callous made the man who he was and what he was capable of doing. Well done snippet. :)
ReplyDeleteLove how you've described the callous in his hands and what it means to her. Wonderful snippet!
ReplyDeleteGreat description. (I love hands... They are one of my favorite body parts.)
ReplyDeleteI love the detail and the novel approach to describing the hero through her eyes. Excellent excerpt!
ReplyDeleteI have to agree. Military men are super sexy. Nice excerpt. I forgot to sign up, but I put some sentences up at http://www.elainepcantrell.blogspot if you've a mind to look at them.
ReplyDeleteThis is such an intimate moment, depite the awkwardness and the dire situation---or maybe because of it? Either way, I hope he appreciates her effort!
ReplyDeleteI'm a sucker for hand porn. John is more than just the perfect "witness"...he's definitely in the running for all-around perfection.
ReplyDeleteHope you're getting all settled-in at the new place!
~Charley
Love descriptions. It allowed me to get familiar with them both a few levels. Great snippet and I love your cover. :D
ReplyDeleteThe tactile details don't get lost in overall feel of the scene. It's clear, you put a lot of information out in a short space, and it's all easy to visualize.
ReplyDeleteGreat description of him--I could picture his hands and arms as if I were touching them myself. Congrats on the new place!
ReplyDeleteThat's a nice compliment.
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