Sunday, October 13, 2013

#SnippetSunday - WIP - Family Stats


Welcome to the Snippet Sunday on the Weird, the Wild, and the Wicked. Thank you so much for visiting. If you choose to comment today, I really appreciate it. Currently, the snippets are from a Work in Progress, the third story in the Cloudburst, Colorado series, and while they aren't consecutive, they are in order within the story. You can read last week's snippet HERE.

Today, I'm offering another snippet from the second chapter of The Cloudburst Coffee and Spa, a WIP in the Cloudburst Colorado series that deals with some of the darker kinks in love. Aiden has returned to Cloudburst to recover his heart in the form of Moira Callahan. The biggest hurdle he has to get past is her family. The snippet is unedited.

Aiden zipped up his jacket as the cold Clouburst wind stole all the heat from his body. Damn, he’d forgotten how bitter it could be in the mountains of Colorado. His strides lengthened and he found himself standing beneath the overhang of the Cliffhanger Bar. Don’t go inside. You’re asking for trouble.
But he pushed the door open and sighed in relief as heat flooded over his chilled body. He shouldn’t be there, not with all the animosity he’d experienced with Moira’s family, but tonight he couldn’t stay away. He settled on a stool at the bar.
“What can I get you?”
Aiden glanced up to take in the bartender and recognition dawned as quickly as the man’s stats. Kieran Callahan, Moira’s younger brother. Blood type AB positive, BMI twenty-two point four, life expectancy ninety-one point six years, ninety-four percent chance he will marry outside his profession.
Aiden dragged his eyes away from Kieran and focused on the handwritten menu on the wall. “I’ll take a Powder Keg Stout.”
 
No wonder he doesn't meet people's gazes. Who wants all those stats all the time? If you'd like to see a photo of the inspiration for Aiden, click HERE. There are several great authors on the Weekend Writing Warrior list and in the Snippet Sunday Facebook group. A few of my favorites are Anastasia Vitsky, SJ Maylee, Gem Sivad, Goran Zidar, Zee Monodee, and Karla Doyle.

Thanks so much for stopping by and happy reading. :)

15 comments:

  1. So, he's more than just a pretty, um, face with a penchant for rainstorms. :D What an interesting ability!

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  2. I liked your excerpt, but the picture of Aiden is drool worthy.

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  3. Hmmm... what happened with her family, I wonder? Great snippet -- I love seamless transitions between the physical world and his inner one.

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  4. Great snippet! I love his 'abilities' and I can imagine it gives him a lot of trouble!

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  5. Wow, that's a lot to know about someone just by looking! The more you show us about Aiden, the more I want to know about him.
    Great snippet! :)

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  6. Interesting! I'm very intrigued by his abilities and curious what will happen next, to say the least. Terrific excerpt!

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  7. Lots of tension and emotion coming right through your snippet. Fabulous.

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  8. I'm loving Aiden, and I can't wait to learn more! His ability reminds me a bit of Raistlin in the Dragonlance series... Thanks for sharing :)

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  9. Love his ability. Interesting snippet. I want more!

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  10. Wow...he REALLY knows his stuff! *grin* Intriguing snippet!

    I have to apologize because I am *so* far behind. You asked a question on my last Sunday Snippet and b/t traveling and deadlines I'm just now going through those. If you're still interested, here's the link to that post and my reply to you: http://sarahballance.wordpress.com/2013/09/22/sept-22-2013-snippetsunday-her-wicked-sin-entangled-scandalous-wewriwa/

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  11. I like the description of Kieran, so statistical. Funny one!

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  12. Interesting snippet. Very intriguing :-)

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  13. What a clever quirk to add to his character. I like it. Very creative of you, Siobhan! Love added touches like that to a character, it makes their personalities distinctive.
    History Sleuth's Milk Carton Murders

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  14. Wished I had been following this. Sounds fascinating, and well written.

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