Welcome to the Weekend Writing Warriors! Thank you so much for visiting and if you choose to comment, I really appreciate it. Most of these snippets are unedited, works in progress, and while my snippets aren't consecutive, they are in order within the story. You can read last week's snippet HERE.
Today, I'm offering another snippet from an upcoming paranormal romance available April 2nd 2013, entitled A Hell Hound's Fire. SQUEEE one more week! :D Ahem, not excited in the least. ;) In this snippet, Sarah Flanagan and her son Liam came to Cloudburst, Colorado, seeking help in escaping a demon. They're werewolves, Moon Singers, and have arrived at Alex MacLaren's safe house. Alex has just made dinner and Sarah has offered to help, laying her hand on his arm. This is in Alex's POV.
He fell into her pale green gaze and his heart
stirred along with his cock. This one, this one is the right one. His Brother let loose a whimper and Alex almost
pulled Sarah into his arms and kissed her. But lightning flashed and thunder
shook the house, making him jump. He stepped back.
“You’re welcome. Just all part of the plan to keep
you safe. You’ve had a rough night and I’m happy to help.” Alex glanced out the
windows to see rain smattering the glass in great sheets. “Looks like we caught
a break, though.”
A cute crease developed between her auburn brows.
“How so?”
“Fitzroy said water confuses demons. I figure
between the river and the rain storm, we got it covered.”
Oops! He almost got caught his his hand in the cookie jar...or his lips on hers. ;) There are several great authors on the Weekend Writing Warrior list and a few of my favorites are Sarah Ballance, Charmaine Gordon, Goran Zidar, Karla Doyle, and Monica Enderle Pierce.
If you're interested in A Hell Hound's fire, here is the cover and blurb:
Alex MacLaren figures he'll never find love again after his mate dies. As one of the rare Hell Hound werewolves, his chances are slim to none. And slim went home. When the local Morukai shaman calls on him to protect a lovely Irish werewolf and her young son from demons, he can't help but take the job.
Sarah Flanagan is desperate to save her son Liam from the deadly monster trailing them, but she's out of options and places to hide. She lost her mate the last time she encountered a demon, and with Liam depending on her, the stakes are far higher this time. After meeting Alex, she's not sure about the Hell Hound, but she’s no fool. He’s their best hope for survival... and hers for another chance at love.
Thank
you all for stopping by and happy reading! :)
Great snippet as always Siobhan, l particularly like this line, 'He fell into her pale green gaze' beautiful!
ReplyDeleteLoved this excerpt,Siobhan!I was right there with them! Could hear the rain on the window!
ReplyDeleteSUCH an intriguing story. I can't wait for the book's release! Today's was another excellent excerpt for sure.
ReplyDeleteAttractions big time and apprehension rings through in this snippet. Can't wait for more.
ReplyDeleteA lot of great tension and chemistry here. And I love the lore that's effortlessly weaved throughout.
ReplyDeleteHis heart stirred along etc. Love this. It conjured up a great picture. Good eight. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteYour characters fascinate me and you write them so well that I just want to jump into the scene and see for myself
ReplyDeleteThis is just fraught with so much emotion, as tense as the storm outside. I was completely caught up in it. Great job!
ReplyDeleteSexual tension and suspense! Such a great mixture and I'm looking forward to the next instalment.
ReplyDeleteThis sounds like a great story. Love his intensity! Well done.
ReplyDeleteYeah, it's almost here. I can't wait to get my hands on it. I'm totally hooked. Love the emotion in this snippet. I'd love to spotlight your release on my blog, if it's okay???
ReplyDeleteGreat job creating tension and conflict in this snippet. Well done!
ReplyDeleteLovely sexual tension in this scene. I like the nice world building touch you slipped in at the end of the snippet.
ReplyDeleteI am so excited about this story! Great excerpt!
ReplyDeleteGood use of the thunderstorm and the way Alex holds onto Sarah. Hope the water will keep those demons at bay.
ReplyDeleteCongrats on the new release. Great excerpt.
ReplyDeleteRomantic timing is always tricky! Still loving the premise---I'm glad I won't have to wait much longer to read the whole thing.
ReplyDeleteSuch sensual tension between them. I loved her pale green eyes and how descriptive you are. This looks like an amazing story and can't wait to read more. :-)
ReplyDeleteLovely eight. I like that water confuses demons. Nice touch.
ReplyDeleteCongrats on the upcoming release! May you sell oodles and oodles of books!
Alex sounds delightful. I really felt the house shake along with them!!
ReplyDeleteGreat sexual tension between them, hope the demons stay away.
ReplyDeleteCongrats and good luck with the new release.
Terrific cover. I love the tension between them. Good luck with the release!
ReplyDeleteThe 2nd of April is only a few days away. I can tell from the SQUEEE that you're excited. I hope it goes well :-)
ReplyDeleteRain always make a nice set up for romance methinks... ;)
ReplyDeleteListen to the rhythm of the falling rain...
ReplyDeleteNever knew that about the rain and demons.
Kudos.
He's such a nice guy (Hell Hound). A lot of good imagery going on. Your writing flows so well, Siobhan.
ReplyDeleteAnd I want to thank you for the great suggestions on the final para of my 8sunday post today. :-)
I'm late getting to these today. Great snippet. I like the role water plays.
ReplyDeleteLike the way you've used water.
ReplyDeleteI love the - This one, this one is the right one - line and also the use of the storm.
ReplyDeleteLips on hers, lips on hers! (I'm chanting here :p) I love the chemistry between them and the teasing glimpses you give us of the Hell Hound (his Brother?). Looking forward to the release, Siobhan!
ReplyDeleteBlast that stupid thunder ruining the mood. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteGreat tension building in this excerpt!
ReplyDeleteAnd just when you think you're safe ... LOL. Of course, if they really are safe and indulge in some of the other kind of action, that's fabulous! LOL.
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