tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post8129488555586418341..comments2023-05-30T08:22:27.137-06:00Comments on The Weird, the Wild, & the Wicked!: Six Sentence Sunday - The Beltane Witch - Skating on a Slippery SlopeSiobhan Muirhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13653107467839760917noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-32652201182513459712012-11-19T12:54:06.220-07:002012-11-19T12:54:06.220-07:00Aw. What an amazing moment!Aw. What an amazing moment!Sarah Ballancehttp://sarahballance.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-17531126380097831792012-10-29T17:35:16.814-06:002012-10-29T17:35:16.814-06:00Lovely Six! I especially liked the gesture when he...Lovely Six! I especially liked the gesture when he rubs his heart, as if he'd just been shot by Cupid's arrow ;-) Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04043328793216518359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-46158235343641867922012-10-29T08:32:58.511-06:002012-10-29T08:32:58.511-06:00I love the emotion here and the gesture he makes b...I love the emotion here and the gesture he makes by rubbing his chest-- nice touch. Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-46601505016701566892012-10-29T01:15:36.277-06:002012-10-29T01:15:36.277-06:00Nice play of emotions in this snippet, and the ima...Nice play of emotions in this snippet, and the imagery was nicely done. The mention of fear and despair at the end has me intrigued... is he anticipating trouble of some kind? Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-3280657347630229392012-10-28T22:54:21.009-06:002012-10-28T22:54:21.009-06:00Good conflict!Good conflict!Laura Kayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06405372483109781087noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-80625045383605294942012-10-28T18:59:23.410-06:002012-10-28T18:59:23.410-06:00Oh! I like him! Love how you've shown his lo...Oh! I like him! Love how you've shown his longing and apprehension.patonlorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04312527117343841653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-68495788654873810042012-10-28T18:43:36.071-06:002012-10-28T18:43:36.071-06:00Love his POV and the gesture he makes rubbing his ...Love his POV and the gesture he makes rubbing his chest. Yeah, this guy is going to fall like an oak--hard and fast. Great six, Siobhan.Silver Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15606837105470988646noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-12593973578336045922012-10-28T18:40:07.504-06:002012-10-28T18:40:07.504-06:00Aw, this is a pretty little vignette :) great six!...Aw, this is a pretty little vignette :) great six!Wendy S. Russohttp://wendysrusso.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-10060665705071624012012-10-28T16:40:27.735-06:002012-10-28T16:40:27.735-06:00Very nice! Ya know I feel the same way when I look...Very nice! Ya know I feel the same way when I look at my own kids. LOLClaire Gillianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08389410834599445845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-85712745921108707272012-10-28T16:28:56.419-06:002012-10-28T16:28:56.419-06:00This is a sweet six, I love his thoughts as he wat...This is a sweet six, I love his thoughts as he watches them. Paula Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10040623635956769807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-5397423666609912742012-10-28T14:58:56.482-06:002012-10-28T14:58:56.482-06:00Great description! And I'm hoping for vampires...Great description! And I'm hoping for vampires next week :)Danii X Hallowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01030080907936799415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-28864302070478888132012-10-28T11:22:00.530-06:002012-10-28T11:22:00.530-06:00Great visualisation. I can picture his admiration ...Great visualisation. I can picture his admiration easily. Nicekristalbairdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18332195962560427033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-18794172449284792572012-10-28T11:14:37.287-06:002012-10-28T11:14:37.287-06:00I like the way you described his yearning at the s...I like the way you described his yearning at the same time he counted the wonderful things about Sabrina and her children. Gem Sivadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01233835029255570402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-7156684097883020552012-10-28T09:01:43.120-06:002012-10-28T09:01:43.120-06:00It is hard to realize what you're missing, wha...It is hard to realize what you're missing, what you want and think of the difficulties of crossing your obstacles to get to it. The detail about rubbing over his heart was stellar.J.M. Blackmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12452636020480500983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-20590646700614900612012-10-28T06:22:32.220-06:002012-10-28T06:22:32.220-06:00What an adorable scene. Nice job, Siobhan :)What an adorable scene. Nice job, Siobhan :)Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-68573192247594055372012-10-28T04:30:27.030-06:002012-10-28T04:30:27.030-06:00That's a super decription of a man, or fae, re...That's a super decription of a man, or fae, realising that it's time to move on and grow up. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com