tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post5277668190681576813..comments2023-05-30T08:22:27.137-06:00Comments on The Weird, the Wild, & the Wicked!: Weekend Writing Warriors - Second Chance Succubus - PlaytimeSiobhan Muirhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13653107467839760917noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-40340599312990123762013-02-23T20:48:50.532-07:002013-02-23T20:48:50.532-07:00I just love how you put me in the scene. Great des...I just love how you put me in the scene. Great descriptions and the details are fabulous!Sarah Ballancehttp://sarahballance.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-23545520430709659122013-02-18T22:41:25.083-07:002013-02-18T22:41:25.083-07:00Very hot snippet!Very hot snippet!Dani-Lyn Alexanderhttp://www.danilynalexander.com/blog.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-425534045262666892013-02-18T13:38:22.359-07:002013-02-18T13:38:22.359-07:00A very vivd scene.A very vivd scene.SherryGLoaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16934189163201067429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-19671314047829207692013-02-17T23:11:40.149-07:002013-02-17T23:11:40.149-07:00That was very nicely done. I think I'm going t...That was very nicely done. I think I'm going to need a lie down before reading anything else. Wow...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-48847136762931651822013-02-17T19:05:39.221-07:002013-02-17T19:05:39.221-07:00Smoking hot snippet!
~Joyce ScarbroughSmoking hot snippet! <br /><br />~Joyce ScarbroughThe Belle in Bluehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16368021976814668783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-9678942007213321352013-02-17T18:58:20.061-07:002013-02-17T18:58:20.061-07:00Great description. I could hear the whip cracking...Great description. I could hear the whip cracking. Nicely done, Siobhan! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-29938400340465585572013-02-17T17:23:13.384-07:002013-02-17T17:23:13.384-07:00Super description. Very vivid scene.Super description. Very vivid scene.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-47083931359705441822013-02-17T17:22:58.386-07:002013-02-17T17:22:58.386-07:00Super description. Very vivid scene.Super description. Very vivid scene.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-87064013033313861342013-02-17T15:15:22.107-07:002013-02-17T15:15:22.107-07:00Fantastic description, Siobhan! It seems Chayse...Fantastic description, Siobhan! It seems Chayse's twin is a step ahead ;-)Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-52600584488505448472013-02-17T14:52:19.320-07:002013-02-17T14:52:19.320-07:00Wow, totally hooked, can't wait for more next ...Wow, totally hooked, can't wait for more next week!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17961489299769954315noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-76644852341034643502013-02-17T14:18:56.609-07:002013-02-17T14:18:56.609-07:00Wow! What a vivid scene. I'm already LOVING th...Wow! What a vivid scene. I'm already LOVING this story. :)Sandra Renee Pessohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12206247562167014745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-58837157767906149292013-02-17T13:53:53.159-07:002013-02-17T13:53:53.159-07:00Great description, especially the whip effect.Great description, especially the whip effect.Paula Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10040623635956769807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-71098451771139287542013-02-17T13:04:00.291-07:002013-02-17T13:04:00.291-07:00Not sure I agree with your premise, but good writi...Not sure I agree with your premise, but good writing.Sue Ann Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17692320238497263942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-25026716950203626202013-02-17T12:44:20.782-07:002013-02-17T12:44:20.782-07:00Wow, great description in this snippet. Not what I...Wow, great description in this snippet. Not what I would have expected from the captive. Now I'm intrigued. Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-67426903531657938872013-02-17T12:22:01.210-07:002013-02-17T12:22:01.210-07:00excellent characterization and imageryexcellent characterization and imagerysuehttp://sassyspeaks.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-68383719572361654702013-02-17T12:01:19.159-07:002013-02-17T12:01:19.159-07:00Now I'm dying to see his response to what he&#...Now I'm dying to see his response to what he's just realized. Excellent description. Joanne Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17708364499624604625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-51144951506575783102013-02-17T11:40:53.174-07:002013-02-17T11:40:53.174-07:00Nicely done :-)Nicely done :-)Sandra Sookoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08864799097052526762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-64884521551578583422013-02-17T11:39:29.376-07:002013-02-17T11:39:29.376-07:00Excellent descriptions in this scene, and it has a...Excellent descriptions in this scene, and it has a nice 'outside looking in' feel due to your choice of wording. Nice six!! Really sets the scene.JoAnne Kenrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15234275353277804224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-78263912330475288002013-02-17T11:33:50.268-07:002013-02-17T11:33:50.268-07:00Oh, my. An education, indeed!
So, who's this...Oh, my. An education, indeed!<br /><br />So, who's this cowboy?Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-42046374270090377242013-02-17T11:31:45.729-07:002013-02-17T11:31:45.729-07:00Yep, his life will never be the same again. Excell...Yep, his life will never be the same again. Excellent choreography in this snippet. Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-28600681626875013082013-02-17T11:18:33.118-07:002013-02-17T11:18:33.118-07:00Great job describing the whipping action against t...Great job describing the whipping action against the wind. Somebody needs to pounce on this cowboy - and fast!Frank Fisherhttp://www.frankmfisher.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-84497296866079895612013-02-17T11:17:06.033-07:002013-02-17T11:17:06.033-07:00Love it when characters have an opinion and we get...Love it when characters have an opinion and we get to see it change over the course of a scene. Well played and intriguing.S.J. Mayleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071906614814860932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-36291782326223815042013-02-17T10:45:10.809-07:002013-02-17T10:45:10.809-07:00I think maybe Nik has led a less vanilla life than...I think maybe Nik has led a less vanilla life than Chayse has. Either that or Nik's more open-minded. Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10261759171411084998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-74406494542509017462013-02-17T10:07:39.738-07:002013-02-17T10:07:39.738-07:00Oh, do tell! When is this tidbit coming out?Oh, do tell! When is this tidbit coming out?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11946961106445145915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-55584406998260517992013-02-17T10:06:49.736-07:002013-02-17T10:06:49.736-07:00Oh, do tell! When is this tidbit coming out?Oh, do tell! When is this tidbit coming out?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11946961106445145915noreply@blogger.com