tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post4649962101686092..comments2023-05-30T08:22:27.137-06:00Comments on The Weird, the Wild, & the Wicked!: Another 200 words for #FridayFictioneers and #FridayPictureShowSiobhan Muirhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13653107467839760917noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-76061400597053232642012-05-02T05:10:35.394-06:002012-05-02T05:10:35.394-06:00Powerful setup here, and I would definitely like t...Powerful setup here, and I would definitely like to know what might happen next, although I feel the clues are all there ;-) great work!<br /><br />My entry is over here: http://joannakneilson.wordpress.com/2012/04/27/flash-fiction-friday-wire-pilgrimage/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-83043077658623538462012-05-01T13:12:42.081-06:002012-05-01T13:12:42.081-06:00I'm not sure, but I'm pretty sure that wer...I'm not sure, but I'm pretty sure that were I to walk into a room with barbed wire and a pitch fork I would run for the exit as fast as I could! Although Lady Aislynn sounds intriguing and fantasy is usually fun!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-52667114079504137242012-04-30T12:20:54.911-06:002012-04-30T12:20:54.911-06:00Great use of the prompts. I had a lot of difficult...Great use of the prompts. I had a lot of difficulty with it. <br /><br />http://russellgayer.blogspot.com/Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02951989303915273807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-37597303026724360122012-04-30T03:50:49.648-06:002012-04-30T03:50:49.648-06:00Wow, I loved it and what a great introduction to a...Wow, I loved it and what a great introduction to a novel.<br /><br />Thanks also for commenting on my Friday Fictioneers at: http://womanontheedgeofreality.com/2012/04/27/friday-fictioneers-torn-flesh-rendered-mute/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-75305072323019218932012-04-29T17:24:46.839-06:002012-04-29T17:24:46.839-06:00Oooo, I want to know what happens after that. :DOooo, I want to know what happens after that. :DNelliehttp://scribblingpencil.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-42288703840049706402012-04-29T02:53:03.638-06:002012-04-29T02:53:03.638-06:00OOps the link disappeared
http://tollykitsjourney...OOps the link disappeared<br /><br />http://tollykitsjourney.wordpress.com/2012/04/27/flash-fiction-story-3-for-fridayfictioneers-flashfiction/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-72776583964324712742012-04-29T02:52:26.481-06:002012-04-29T02:52:26.481-06:00Excellent choice they well so well togeher and I e...Excellent choice they well so well togeher and I enjoyed the story. Well done.<br /><br />Here's mineAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-82317010278175199712012-04-28T20:31:55.056-06:002012-04-28T20:31:55.056-06:00ouch. I don't know how could stand that.ouch. I don't know how could stand that.Sonia Lalhttp://storytreasury.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-17092712053393833482012-04-28T17:50:43.662-06:002012-04-28T17:50:43.662-06:00Great work on creating an intriguing scene charged...Great work on creating an intriguing scene charged with atmosphere, erotic tension and a sense that matters are about to move beyond the mundane. I liked the discomfort of Chayse and the club environment felt like one of the themed rooms you can find in love hotels in Tokyo (or so I'm told...) This is my favourite of yours that I have read so far. :-)<br /><br />Thanks for reading mine over at:<br /><br />http://andyfloodwritersblog.wordpress.com/2012/04/27/reversal/Andyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07254931008152511864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-50993641336360821502012-04-28T14:40:17.960-06:002012-04-28T14:40:17.960-06:00Wow, two stories in one. And I loved them both! Th...Wow, two stories in one. And I loved them both! Think I'll go get a tall glass of cold water now!! ;) <br /><br />Here's mine: http://wp.me/pReXn-fvAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-25224339095432414892012-04-28T08:30:15.167-06:002012-04-28T08:30:15.167-06:00Smoking hot, lady! Love the combination of the two...Smoking hot, lady! Love the combination of the two prompts into one seamless scene. Great imagery and scary sexy. :DCara Michaelshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00956521710750982258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-73890588086809404762012-04-28T00:49:59.828-06:002012-04-28T00:49:59.828-06:00An excellent combination of the two prompts, I jus...An excellent combination of the two prompts, I just had to read on. What a mixture of cultures there! Well done.Sandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-8982849234826704302012-04-27T14:20:03.841-06:002012-04-27T14:20:03.841-06:00Thanks, Gary! That makes me really happy that you ...Thanks, Gary! That makes me really happy that you picked her because I used Lady Heather as a template for Lady Aislynn. You just made my day! Thanks for commenting. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-31450378545111653582012-04-27T14:18:28.764-06:002012-04-27T14:18:28.764-06:00You got it in one, Susie! :) Thanks for your comme...You got it in one, Susie! :) Thanks for your comment. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-5420318348875559202012-04-27T14:18:05.417-06:002012-04-27T14:18:05.417-06:00Great take on both picture prompts they worked sea...Great take on both picture prompts they worked seamlessly together. I like the implications of the fantasy. Here's my offering http://remakingme-atiyatownes.blogspot.com/2012/04/flash-fiction-clearing-wire.html<br /><br />Great story, I hope you expand this one.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01364381351816604082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-63811877564366636972012-04-27T14:17:49.895-06:002012-04-27T14:17:49.895-06:00Yes, this is a special club where fantasies aren&#...Yes, this is a special club where fantasies aren't vanilla. This is Nik and Chayse's first experience with it. Thanks for stopping by. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-52179284849006271272012-04-27T14:16:39.873-06:002012-04-27T14:16:39.873-06:00Thanks for the comment. In the story, the bullwhip...Thanks for the comment. In the story, the bullwhip was only for effect, to titillate the woman tied up. Later in the action the "cowboy Dom" will use a flogger or a crop. But for this scene, it fit better for him to be carrying a bullwhip. Thanks for stopping by, :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-47944618617646091652012-04-27T14:12:21.675-06:002012-04-27T14:12:21.675-06:00This sounds like the working out of a sexual fanta...This sounds like the working out of a sexual fantasy. The bigger story sounds interesting. Really cool.C.C. https://www.blogger.com/profile/06070310862785263964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-64345226079172776502012-04-27T13:56:07.434-06:002012-04-27T13:56:07.434-06:00Oh boy, what an intense scene. Nicely done. I love...Oh boy, what an intense scene. Nicely done. I love your use of description to set the scene.Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-12582045751648700762012-04-27T13:51:22.897-06:002012-04-27T13:51:22.897-06:00Oh, ouch! Barbed wire AND a bullwhip--WICKED!! Ni...Oh, ouch! Barbed wire AND a bullwhip--WICKED!! Nicely woven scene--great imagry.<br /><br />Mine: http://www.vlgregory-circa1800.vpweb.com/blog.htmlPalooski65https://www.blogger.com/profile/12635395881961075975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-11419615016556904552012-04-27T13:50:10.313-06:002012-04-27T13:50:10.313-06:00Also, another whip that could be used is a snake w...Also, another whip that could be used is a snake whip, which was used on slaves. A three-tailed or nine-tailed whip also works, but without the hooks or beads at the end--less likely to kill that way.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-3911572164779780472012-04-27T13:47:39.101-06:002012-04-27T13:47:39.101-06:00Bull whips are powerful enough to kill people. One...Bull whips are powerful enough to kill people. One Inuit in Alaska used a bull whip to kill wolves and soon used it to hunt caribou as a gun cost too much to keep up with. <br />Love the combining, which is a great idea! Your stories remind me of how much people will do to satisfy others, thus enslaving themselves and their costumers to sex and fantasy (or, rather, whatever is on demand). Great imagery and depth.<br />You saw mine, but just in case anyone else wants to read: http://saberdragon.wordpress.com/2012/04/27/flash-fiction-friday/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-7257678363710796512012-04-27T13:23:51.862-06:002012-04-27T13:23:51.862-06:00Strange. Reminded me of Lady Heather from the olde...Strange. Reminded me of Lady Heather from the older CSI Vegas series.<br /><br />Mine's here:<br />http://garybaileywriting.wordpress.com/2012/04/27/fridayfictioneers-hunterhunted/BlueFuryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06483390469809730477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-28100336709874193622012-04-27T13:16:07.147-06:002012-04-27T13:16:07.147-06:00You combined the two prompts seamlessly with a tak...You combined the two prompts seamlessly with a take on the prompt unlike any of the others. Good job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06685522146476012585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-50994472651450996262012-04-27T12:57:29.594-06:002012-04-27T12:57:29.594-06:00Very interesting take on the prompt.
Here's m...Very interesting take on the prompt.<br /><br />Here's mine: http://thebradleychronicles.wordpress.com/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com