tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post3364604611931580585..comments2023-05-30T08:22:27.137-06:00Comments on The Weird, the Wild, & the Wicked!: Weekend Writing Warriors - Second Chance Succubus - Straight StorySiobhan Muirhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13653107467839760917noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-28282637081074702872013-02-10T21:05:55.300-07:002013-02-10T21:05:55.300-07:00Sounds like she's in trouble. Lots of question...Sounds like she's in trouble. Lots of questions. Great tension, too. Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-14032713062191473872013-02-10T18:59:08.061-07:002013-02-10T18:59:08.061-07:00LOL... I'd be mad if I were him too. ;)LOL... I'd be mad if I were him too. ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09899243599516908136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-74762915017833833802013-02-10T17:22:46.795-07:002013-02-10T17:22:46.795-07:00Okay, I thought I commented but it's not here ...Okay, I thought I commented but it's not here and I don't know if I did something wrong or what. =cP My comment was that he's got a point (and that he does!) LOL.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-82750181633276341982013-02-10T15:53:23.717-07:002013-02-10T15:53:23.717-07:00Doesn't look good for the Lady, now does it? G...Doesn't look good for the Lady, now does it? Great eight!Sandra Renee Pessohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12206247562167014745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-41423087095752093422013-02-10T15:47:32.108-07:002013-02-10T15:47:32.108-07:00He does make a most convincing argument!He does make a most convincing argument!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-14923943749700442482013-02-10T13:50:10.458-07:002013-02-10T13:50:10.458-07:00He's going to be rather upset if it turns out ...He's going to be rather upset if it turns out she's telling the truth. Lots of tension in this snippet.Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10261759171411084998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-27326315918257846622013-02-10T13:08:18.177-07:002013-02-10T13:08:18.177-07:00Hmmm. Great snippet! Loving this story.Hmmm. Great snippet! Loving this story.Karysa Fairehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09519776785650008126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-26682003015683035022013-02-10T12:56:34.725-07:002013-02-10T12:56:34.725-07:00Hard to argue with his reasoning.Hard to argue with his reasoning.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-30233173647994089352013-02-10T12:45:57.414-07:002013-02-10T12:45:57.414-07:00Thanks, Virginia. Lady Aislynn is her title, but h...Thanks, Virginia. Lady Aislynn is her title, but he doesn't think she's much of a lady. She's the Mistress of a BDSM club. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-85116184414702549302013-02-10T11:58:50.284-07:002013-02-10T11:58:50.284-07:00Great snippet, certainly lays his case out. I love...Great snippet, certainly lays his case out. I love the way he emphasizes "Lady" at the end. Just a thought, but it might have even more impact if he doesn't use the Lady initially, maybe just Aislyn, when he first addresses her, or, if he knows her last name, Ms. Just a thought.<br /><br />Great job!Virginia Kellyhttp://virginiakelly.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-82218494128384471292013-02-10T11:53:11.539-07:002013-02-10T11:53:11.539-07:00Interesting (if a bit gruesome LOL), can't wai...Interesting (if a bit gruesome LOL), can't wait to see what she has to say for herself. Terrific snippet!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-86812588357272872012013-02-10T11:45:27.649-07:002013-02-10T11:45:27.649-07:00Oh, my. Great tension and intrigue.
Oh, my. Great tension and intrigue.<br />Ann Swannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08826695313958091226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-92036355965157251502013-02-10T11:40:37.054-07:002013-02-10T11:40:37.054-07:00love the premise and can see the character already...love the premise and can see the character alreadysuehttp://sassyspeaks.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-56754340210375083182013-02-10T11:07:02.619-07:002013-02-10T11:07:02.619-07:00Oohhh, nice tension between them. I'm wonderin...Oohhh, nice tension between them. I'm wondering if she's now going to put him in his place. Joanne Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17708364499624604625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-10045882789583796442013-02-10T10:54:53.191-07:002013-02-10T10:54:53.191-07:00I like Wolffe's reaction to her. His dialogue ...I like Wolffe's reaction to her. His dialogue shows his emotions without having to add more details. But I'm guessing she won't change her statement.Frank Fisherhttp://www.frankmfisher.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-60323289864321545832013-02-10T10:10:04.847-07:002013-02-10T10:10:04.847-07:00Looks like he's caught her out in a web of lie...Looks like he's caught her out in a web of lies. I like his no-nonsence attitude to the crime and the way he lays the facts out to trip her up.Clare Davidsonhttp://www.claredavidson.com/blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-75297870731309892352013-02-10T10:05:38.488-07:002013-02-10T10:05:38.488-07:00I like him. Wonderful snippet!I like him. Wonderful snippet!A.S. Fenichelhttp://asfenichel.net/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-31480888435541340912013-02-10T10:04:25.074-07:002013-02-10T10:04:25.074-07:00Looks like a cut and dried case. :) Very niceLooks like a cut and dried case. :) Very niceAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-49414265389164320632013-02-10T08:50:15.768-07:002013-02-10T08:50:15.768-07:00Oooh, can cut the tension and animosity with a kni...Oooh, can cut the tension and animosity with a knife!Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-21822452780505741132013-02-10T08:10:49.838-07:002013-02-10T08:10:49.838-07:00Seems like she has a lot of explaining todo - and ...Seems like she has a lot of explaining todo - and fast! Paula Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10040623635956769807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-85713934464974207652013-02-10T08:09:21.342-07:002013-02-10T08:09:21.342-07:00I sense a major clash coming between these two! Gr...I sense a major clash coming between these two! Great snippet!<br /><br />~Joyce ScarbroughThe Belle in Bluehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16368021976814668783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-32621334011322554552013-02-10T08:04:25.208-07:002013-02-10T08:04:25.208-07:00Sounds like a vampire did it! She's innocent!Sounds like a vampire did it! She's innocent!Lila Shawhttp://lilashaw.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-45915443714050549102013-02-10T07:04:47.127-07:002013-02-10T07:04:47.127-07:00Ruh-roh, that doesn't sound good. I hope she t...Ruh-roh, that doesn't sound good. I hope she thinks fast. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat wanting to know more. More Please.S.J. Mayleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071906614814860932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-27173003974896856272013-02-10T07:03:56.511-07:002013-02-10T07:03:56.511-07:00For her kind. Interesting.For her kind. Interesting.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-14339358538260544472013-02-10T06:48:51.668-07:002013-02-10T06:48:51.668-07:00Oh wow... love this snippet! Chayse has certainly ...Oh wow... love this snippet! Chayse has certainly got bite ;) love his attitude and deliberation.JoAnne Kenrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15234275353277804224noreply@blogger.com