tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post5679608174378759362..comments2023-05-30T08:22:27.137-06:00Comments on The Weird, the Wild, & the Wicked!: A New World #100words (well 200) for the #FridayFictioneersSiobhan Muirhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13653107467839760917noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-26703500422110715712012-03-27T14:25:20.525-06:002012-03-27T14:25:20.525-06:00Very clever story, and I loved the 'chuckling&...Very clever story, and I loved the 'chuckling' water. Nice change of descriptive for what is usually called 'babbling' brooks :) I like how you combined the two, but I like the whole story in general!Madison Woodshttp://madisonwoods.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-16956705469564795832012-03-24T18:09:00.862-06:002012-03-24T18:09:00.862-06:00Dangerous. I love the image of skeletal branches. ...Dangerous. I love the image of skeletal branches. It's all rather more sombre than exciting, but I thought there was interest in it.<br /><br />http://littlewonder2.wordpress.com/2012/03/22/friday-fictioneers-lost-sun/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-38004821562047706112012-03-24T15:09:01.866-06:002012-03-24T15:09:01.866-06:00I forgot to give you mine...
http://tedinfrida...I forgot to give you mine... <br /><br />http://tedinfridayharbor.blogspot.com/2012/03/friday-flash-fictioneers-bang.htmlTed Strutzhttp://tedstrutz.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-10192510981246969852012-03-24T11:09:32.329-06:002012-03-24T11:09:32.329-06:00Nice! Two stories... 'Turned into lamps to war...Nice! Two stories... 'Turned into lamps to warn others'... excellent!tedstrutzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09853272125990540823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-79717603498975829772012-03-24T09:52:12.536-06:002012-03-24T09:52:12.536-06:00Great fantasy tale, you've captured my interes...Great fantasy tale, you've captured my interest and make me want to read so much more! I hope she makes it okay!<br /><br />Mine: http://writetuit.wordpress.com/2012/03/24/flash-friday-kill-shot/Judeehttp://writetuit.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-73973308260436341472012-03-24T07:44:00.652-06:002012-03-24T07:44:00.652-06:00I loved "chuckling water" and "They...I loved "chuckling water" and "They looked like skeletal fingers desperately seeking sustenance." Good excerpt, Siobhan!Jan Morrillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15600019541133998696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-63354030048130707182012-03-24T01:40:13.565-06:002012-03-24T01:40:13.565-06:00The stories are seamlessly linked and i enjoyed it...The stories are seamlessly linked and i enjoyed it really. take a peep at mine:<br />https://seewilliams.wordpress.com/2012/03/23/scorched/Teacher of Menhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509810158918896987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-79786205229848608132012-03-23T22:58:31.080-06:002012-03-23T22:58:31.080-06:00I have a feeling combining the two prompts took so...I have a feeling combining the two prompts took some doing. Nice job. Here's mine:<br />www.triplemoonstar.blogspot.comLoranoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-67524825226820966722012-03-23T15:09:02.189-06:002012-03-23T15:09:02.189-06:00Dear Siobhan,
You're pretty amazing the way y...Dear Siobhan,<br /><br />You're pretty amazing the way you can craft a story from the same world for two disparate photo prompts. I say 'well done' in that regard and thought you led us to that stark ending with the photo from Madison without a hitch. I honestly thought that that was going to be her last thought and sight just before she was turned into the thirteenth lamp. (Now I'm off to look up Dryad. Should know, but, alas, I do not...yet.)<br /><br />Aloha,<br /><br />Doug<br /><br />P.S. Thanks for the comment on my site. i appreciate it. D.Douglas MacIlroyhttp://ironwoodwind.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-45810852776607686152012-03-23T13:12:48.230-06:002012-03-23T13:12:48.230-06:00Beautiful story, Siobhan, although I'm not con...Beautiful story, Siobhan, although I'm not convinced it's all going to be pretty when they reach the Council of Elders. You have got me completely hooked here, nicely done.<br /><br />I’m over here: http://elmowrites.wordpress.com/2012/03/23/friday-fictioneers-the-crater/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-6508802988350118402012-03-23T13:11:41.914-06:002012-03-23T13:11:41.914-06:00Very nicely woven to bend the story to the photo p...Very nicely woven to bend the story to the photo prompts or vice versa. It remains a strong, coherent tale through the transition. Bravo!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05504298750127152026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-12932408016134789932012-03-23T13:02:47.294-06:002012-03-23T13:02:47.294-06:00Wonderful two pieces, loved the fingers toward the...Wonderful two pieces, loved the fingers toward the sky.<br /><br />Here's mine: http://teschoenborn.com/2012/03/22/friday-fictioneer-3/T.E.Schoenbornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05618470366896573356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-22220506999895682582012-03-23T12:57:33.486-06:002012-03-23T12:57:33.486-06:00Feels like it could sit quite nicely in a Narnia s...Feels like it could sit quite nicely in a Narnia story. Very impressed, great way to combine two prompts!<br /><br />http://garybaileywriting.wordpress.com/2012/03/23/fridayfictioneers-crimson-sunset/BlueFuryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06483390469809730477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-29986399189095753192012-03-23T12:57:16.386-06:002012-03-23T12:57:16.386-06:00Thanks for reading the interview. I really appreci...Thanks for reading the interview. I really appreciate it. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-64143379451679202332012-03-23T12:46:09.026-06:002012-03-23T12:46:09.026-06:00The two fit very well together, and next to unicor...The two fit very well together, and next to unicorns, I'm rooting for the centaurs. I like this reference to the skeletal fingers reaching up. Someone else used this, and I'm a bit miffed I didn't notice that aspect of the picture, as it's quite a graphic concept. Very well done.Sandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-32667163065444030982012-03-23T12:22:15.451-06:002012-03-23T12:22:15.451-06:00Great hook--I'd love to read this story in its...Great hook--I'd love to read this story in its entirety and I'm not usually drawn into fantasy sooooo completely. Well done.<br /><br />Thanks for visiting and commenting on my site. :-)Palooski65https://www.blogger.com/profile/12635395881961075975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-19058258929419940362012-03-23T12:11:16.401-06:002012-03-23T12:11:16.401-06:00I like the way you combined the two prompts. Too b...I like the way you combined the two prompts. Too bad for the twelve dancing princesses--at least they made beautiful lamps!<br /><br />thanks for the nice comments on mine, but I don't believe we want hair on Olive Oyl's chest~HA!<br /><br />http://russellgayer.blogspot.com/<br /><br />P.S. - enoyed your interview on C.Moss blog :)Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02951989303915273807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-60200029411415419312012-03-23T11:54:21.456-06:002012-03-23T11:54:21.456-06:00Great way to blend the two prompts. Beautiful wri...Great way to blend the two prompts. Beautiful writing as always.Wakefield Mahonhttp://www.wakefieldmahon.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-9914094460471378192012-03-23T11:14:10.965-06:002012-03-23T11:14:10.965-06:00I love your description of the pale white branches...I love your description of the pale white branches looking like skeletal fingers. Good work. Here's mine: http://postcardfiction.com/2012/03/23/trapped/janethttp://postcardfiction.comnoreply@blogger.com