tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post1252194719083423312..comments2023-05-30T08:22:27.137-06:00Comments on The Weird, the Wild, & the Wicked!: Six Sentence Sunday - The Beltane Witch - Waiting to InhaleSiobhan Muirhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13653107467839760917noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-19546302535214420742012-10-06T14:25:18.659-06:002012-10-06T14:25:18.659-06:00Can he hear her thoughts? This is so well written ...Can he hear her thoughts? This is so well written I feel as if I'm there!Sarah Ballancehttp://sarahballance.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-17400405730122988272012-09-24T15:33:37.517-06:002012-09-24T15:33:37.517-06:00I love the look into this moment. It's an inti...I love the look into this moment. It's an intimate moment--when you're near unconsciousness, and someone is talking to you. And I love her name!J.M. Blackmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12452636020480500983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-86891856392720845382012-09-23T16:20:46.710-06:002012-09-23T16:20:46.710-06:00intense six! The description is great.intense six! The description is great.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-2595148353866521142012-09-23T15:36:55.135-06:002012-09-23T15:36:55.135-06:00It's not my idea of a good visit to a coffee s...It's not my idea of a good visit to a coffee shop. I like your use of the white flag, very clever.Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-18645316339196751652012-09-23T13:34:28.405-06:002012-09-23T13:34:28.405-06:00'I can’t...Sabrina’s mind raised the white fla...'I can’t...Sabrina’s mind raised the white flag and surrendered to the darkness.' Love this line because of the contrast of colors.Karysa Fairehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09519776785650008126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-6843526632718118402012-09-23T12:34:19.961-06:002012-09-23T12:34:19.961-06:00Love the way you've described her falling unco...Love the way you've described her falling unconscious. Well done!Vivien Deanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15510934097238428891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-9697031144749900412012-09-23T11:57:07.333-06:002012-09-23T11:57:07.333-06:00Nice description, but did she hit more than her he...Nice description, but did she hit more than her head, to have the wind knocked out of her?Sue Ann Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17692320238497263942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-60145568420731039142012-09-23T11:17:04.365-06:002012-09-23T11:17:04.365-06:00I love the way you described her blacking out. Fan...I love the way you described her blacking out. Fantastic! Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-33714568056791357712012-09-23T10:46:38.685-06:002012-09-23T10:46:38.685-06:00Oh, Siobhan! Is she really hearing him in her head...Oh, Siobhan! Is she really hearing him in her head, or is she that addled? LOVE the speculation you create with this six. Well done!Silver Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15606837105470988646noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-60673309199024019272012-09-23T10:28:14.526-06:002012-09-23T10:28:14.526-06:00I wonder what she'll wake to...and where.I wonder what she'll wake to...and where.Claire Gillianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08389410834599445845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-87695320124697595082012-09-23T10:08:35.481-06:002012-09-23T10:08:35.481-06:00I love this! What a fantastic six this is. I hooke...I love this! What a fantastic six this is. I hooked!A.S. Fenichelhttp://www.asfenichel.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-3341100300444755482012-09-23T09:43:38.791-06:002012-09-23T09:43:38.791-06:00Great decsription of her passing out, especially t...Great decsription of her passing out, especially the white flag. Paula Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10040623635956769807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-52948290775637209552012-09-23T09:32:35.214-06:002012-09-23T09:32:35.214-06:00Nicely done. You pack a lot of the undercurrent in...Nicely done. You pack a lot of the undercurrent into this six.Cara Bristolhttp://www.carabristol.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-51385669510762471932012-09-23T09:19:45.396-06:002012-09-23T09:19:45.396-06:00I loved the raising the white flag bit. Great desc...I loved the raising the white flag bit. Great description of the overall scene.Frank Fisherhttp://www.frankmfisher.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-2004362451279014722012-09-23T07:51:14.514-06:002012-09-23T07:51:14.514-06:00What a fantastic set of six!!!! What a fantastic set of six!!!! Samantha Darlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02325022279832124481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-70999418311041679462012-09-23T07:43:16.265-06:002012-09-23T07:43:16.265-06:00You have a wonderful way with words! Loved this.You have a wonderful way with words! Loved this.gemma parkeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06275261646534324484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-37672341135664038822012-09-23T06:58:57.154-06:002012-09-23T06:58:57.154-06:00Oh, I hope she's okay. Great description of he...Oh, I hope she's okay. Great description of her slipping into the darkness! :)Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3660724681445159067.post-47699006236807740742012-09-23T05:51:30.168-06:002012-09-23T05:51:30.168-06:00Heh - love the "raised the white flag" b...Heh - love the "raised the white flag" bit.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17703102405965656616noreply@blogger.com